huaha
Vocals should be louder. It's barely recognizable behind all the instruments.
(Impossible to understand unless you simultaneously read lyrics). It's quite waste of such a nice literature if you can't understand it.
Snotty screaming itself isn't bad, I know it's supposed to be like that and that's how I like it too. Just some gore and volume to it and it would make my so far achieved boner drill throught my pants. Other than that, nice work.