SonSukka's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pro Tipps]

This made me lol so good I accidentally hit my girlfriend in her mouth with a baseball bat.

TheShadling responds:

Without teeth the blowjobs will be better.

[Candelabra]

huashas

Some might say this much chessboard dithering is bad, but it's a matter of taste if you ask me. Some feel nostalgic and some think it's mediocore and easy to do. I have been there myself too, so saying anything foolish about it is just making an idiot out of myself. From my experience it's been a fun stage in learning pixel art. After having enough of chessboards, I recommend experimenting with different patterns of dithering and textures.

It seems like you grasp the basics of anti-aliasing, but there are places you have too little AA, some places have too much AA and some AAed spots have banding. Banding means two lines of pixels indentical next to each other. This usually appears in different colours in shading or in a simple shapes surrounded by stable layer of AA pixels. This banding effect appears on the "Belas" eyebrows and succubusse's corners of the mouth. See how soft they look compared to everything else?

8 stars for doing a pixel piece at this size, I believe it took you some time. Anatomy and clothing doesn't reveal much distracting flaws, although I'm not very fond of the animeish faces. Good job overally. Don't stop here, you can get alot better than this.

medli20 responds:

Thank you so much for the helpful review! I'm admittedly fairly new at AA and dithering, so I feel like I don't have a very good grasp on either of them. Reviews like these help me learn faster though, so I'm thrilled whenever I get such a comprehensive critique like this. :)

I'll try to practice my AA as to not have too much / too little of it, as well as exploring new dithering patterns. Thanks again for the critique! :D

[Newgrounds Sprite guys!]

huaha

Thats looking great, but why blur the pixels?

AlmightyHans responds:

they're not blurred. maybe you should get glasses.

[Pixel Armory v3]

huaha

Pretty nice work there man. Spriting might look like easy job, but it certainly isnt.
First thing that comes to mind when I look at these, is Soldat.

You sire get the cigar.

RamboFox responds:

Especially when with the subject has a fair amount of detail - making an odd number of pixels look like textured gun metal can be quite a challenge.
And yeah, I did get a couple of comments on another art website - one even claiming that I ripped straight from Soldat.
The interesting thing is that I originally sprited these at twice the size they are now - but I needed them to be smaller (so that their size can fit in with the other sprites that I was working on)

Thank you :)

[Adam 2.0- Expulsed]

huaha

Maybe a bit sharper? There are sharp parts and parts that look neglected, this is a serious issue of balance! I like shading and the glow by the way.

duplex2 responds:

Hi, I wanted to keep the focus in the up zone of the picture, maybe i left the down zone too much unsharped.

Many thanks.

[A very excited llama]

huaha

its jerking off it's titties ;o

Daverom responds:

Massaging.
Massaging off it's titties

[Remains]

huah

at first I thought those little guys was about to get hit by a giant fist, huaha!
that red rock behind the horizon looked like a fist :D

other than that, now that i've shaped what it is i think its pretty nice, fast and simple, thought im still bit unaware of what it is actually is

idiot-monarch responds:

Supposed to be a big skeleton of some monster

[-Frame-]

i have a question too

does she have three hands?

Mirocka responds:

no, 2 lol

[Calamity Logo]

yah

I and T together seem'd like N.
I thought it was Calamny till I check'd the title.

I assume you used paint. (?)
Great work, thought you could've made those faces and junk first, then move letters on it.

DragonPunch responds:

But then I wouldn't have gotten the no white background effect. Not only that, it would've taken me a lot longer to do.

[just darnell]

Good

Good

and
Your dark style is adorable!

dommi-fresh responds:

ADORABLE?! that is great choice of words
thanks for writing